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My Immortal: Luna's Lament

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well here it is guys my Comic Sneak-Peek 

this takes place while Princess Celestia and Luna lived in the castle of 2 sisters! yes it's in the past XD
and after TerrorTale is defeated and banished into the shadows. Luna gains her full power potential but still morns for her lost and forgotten mentor
sorry guys I don't want to give too much away XD but enjoy!  

again this is a pic that has a song which explains what exactly is going on

TerrorTale belongs to  :iconterrortale:
Story belongs to :iconpitterpaint::iconterrortale:
MLP:FIM belongs to :iconfyre-flye: & Hasbro 

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=cu7QvO…
(I edited the lyrics below)
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My Immortal
Evanescence 

I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus:]
"When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears"
And I held your hoof through all of these years
But you still have all of me

You used to captivate me by your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face—it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice—it chased away all the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus]

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along

[Chorus]

...me, me, me.

(the the whispery voice in the background signifies Terror)
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Quick story if u guys have absolutely no idea whats this is about here:


 I just haven't explained everything yet. SweetDreams was a mentor to Luna teaching her how to control her magic (because Celestia was to busy with royal duties to help her little sis) But SweetDream's fears consumed her and turned her into the Monster TerrorTale. Celestia and luna confronted her and used the Elements form the tree of Harmony (the elements were not named yet) to stop her and banish her into the shadows. afterwords Celestia goes to her subject t calm them down but luna goes home to morn her mother/sister figure that she just lost.

after all this, the song signifies Luna's feelings of loneliness and how she wishes the her mentor was still with her. the only pony who understood her and the only one to teach her. in the song it states that she's loosing her sanity… this story is a precursor before NightMare moon.

(click the link and read the words) 
this story belongs to :iconpitterpaint: and is only to be used by :iconpitterpaint: 





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Cheschire-Kaat's avatar
why your sister deactivated?